FREE WRITING

       FREE WRITING

On Sunday the 27th of November 2016 The sun was shining and the bird’s were sing . We were run down and up a hill when we were finished run up and down the hill we saw a brown big bear that had harry fare and the bear tried to eat us.So we played died and it did not eat us so we ran away like tow cheetahs run so that they saw a big dear and ran after it . So we saw a tree and Climb up it then we then star they there  were there for the night we wake up and ran away when the bear was asleep and ran to a big Fancy house and that was the end of the story

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TERM 4 FREE WRITE PART 1

In the Holiday I went to

ALL about Valerie Adams

This is Valerie Adams And presentation all about Valerie Adams and her lifer like her MUM DAD and her coach

Dictogloss

                                                                                     Dictogloss

Team leader America and the amazing Teacher Avengers are fighting a new supervillain . The supervillain is as strong as an ox, and as fast as a cheetah. He wears a deep purple cape and a sparkly green face mask to hide the hideous scar that  covers more than half his face. He is a ninja warrior prowling around in  the dark of night often leaving behind traces of his one and only weakness...empty KFC buckets

Today we learn about Dictogloss did you now that the one that in green are the real paragraph the one that in the box are just for example this pargraph his more details for more information please leave a comment

Problem Solving: Week 4 - Term 2 S & R

Math Problem .

 Today I find out that Math problem was fun I love to do my math work so here is my math work that is about Math problem .

Maths Problem Solving

Hi this is my Math Problem solving This week term 4 has been work hard to finish they work

Year 5/6 Camp Blog Comments

Year ⅚ Camp Blog Comments

Blog URL :	Write 1-2 sentences (In your OWN words) about something you liked in their blog post.	Write 1-2 sentences describing WHY you liked that part of their post.
http://pesandrewb.blogspot.co.nz/2016/03/year-5-6-camp.html#comment-for	What I like about Andrew camp post is that he love cooking like me and he inspired me how to cook .	What I like about Andrew Camp post is that what he  like about camp and that he used  interesting words.
http://pesjonathonf.blogspot.co.nz/2016/03/yr-5-6-camp.html?showComment=1459285210919#c4200196633400328026	What i like about Jonathan Camp post was that he said told us about what do you like about kayaking what he did not like	What I like about Jonathon post is that he told the truth about  why he was scared about kayaking.
http://pesjavant.blogspot.co.nz/2016/03/5-6-camp.html?showComment=1459285913193#c4179681941108112333	What I like about Javant Camp post was that he told all about what he  like about the activities.	When I look at Javant camp post it had great compassion and he told that he love camp .
http://pesviliamik.blogspot.co.nz/2016/03/year-5-camp.html#comment-form	What I like about Viliami camp Post  was  that he said good things about his leaders and he follow instructions.	Viliami had incredible words about the chips he use interesting word fantastic word it was the best post about camp
http://pesdeavayh.blogspot.co.nz/2016/03/deavay-my-first-day-of-camp.html#comment-form	What I like about Devay camp post is that he inspire people about his camp .	About Devay camp post it was great  I like how you he use lots of detail and your story is amazing

year 5/6 camp Blog Comment

Year ⅚ Camp Blog Comments

Blog URL :	Write 1-2 sentences (In your OWN words) about something you liked in their blog post.	Write 1-2 sentences describing WHY you liked that part of their post.
http://pesandrewb.blogspot.co.nz/2016/03/year-5-6-camp.html#comment-for	What I like about Andrew camp post is that he love cooking like me and he inspired me how to cook .	What I like about Andrew Camp post is that what he  like about camp and that he used  interesting words.
http://pesjonathonf.blogspot.co.nz/2016/03/yr-5-6-camp.html?showComment=1459285210919#c4200196633400328026	What i like about Jonathan Camp post was that he said told us about what do you like about kayaking what he did not like	What I like about Jonathon post is that he told the truth about  why he was scared about kayaking.
http://pesjavant.blogspot.co.nz/2016/03/5-6-camp.html?showComment=1459285913193#c4179681941108112333	What I like about Javant Camp post was that he told all about what he  like about the activities.	When I look at Javant camp post it had great compassion and he told that he love camp .
http://pesviliamik.blogspot.co.nz/2016/03/year-5-camp.html#comment-form	What I like about Viliami camp Post  was  that he said good things about his leaders and he follow instructions.	Viliami had incredible words about the chips he use interesting word fantastic word it was the best post about camp
http://pesdeavayh.blogspot.co.nz/2016/03/deavay-my-first-day-of-camp.html#comment-form	What I like about Devay camp post is that he inspire people about his camp .	About Devay camp post it was great  I like how you he use lots of detail and your story is amazing

Hi I now you are looking at my camp post it look great if you read it you will fould it incredible

When the volcano Erupted

WALT: summarise the events in a text

Br and Cr Words

 Today I am learning about Br and Cr here is my presentation just for you I hope you like it if you need more information please liver please leave a comment.

Monsters

Today on the 30th of February we learn about this monsters movie it is called Monsters if you  want more information you can give me A comment I hope you like it .

The Two Volcanoes

One day in Auckland they was 2 volcanoes that were awake. they were soothing lava everywhere everybody was screaming.  but the volcano had a rest then they had a sleep .but all the people were happy. the people had a holiday and a vacation.they also had good ideas give  people .treat that was the end of that then the volcanoes came back .and soothing lava the volcanoes   like at the people .and then the volcanoes spot the volcanoes feet sorry he said I will not hurt you.   but that was the END of that  THE END.

Dragonflies

This week we have been learn about dragonfly here is my poster  it has more information about dragonflies I hope you like it please leave a comment .

The 2 NARRATIVE VOLCANOES

Narrative Writing

         

WALT: identify the key features of a narrative.

Write a narrative (which will then go onto your blog), that tells the story discussed in class.

START WRITING HERE: One day in Auckland they was 2 volcanoes that were awake. they were soothing lava everywhere everybody was screaming.  but the volcano had a rest then they had a sleep .but all the people were happy. the people had a holiday and a vacation.they also had good ideas give  people treat that was the end of that then the volcanoes came back and soothing lava the volcanoes   like at the people and then the volcanoes spot the volcanoes feet sorry but that was the END of that  THE END

MATHS PROBLEM SOLVING

Today me and my partner Tatiana were doing Problem solving it was lost of fun we learn so much  from it .look at this presentation it will gave you some ideas to get smart

Duffy Theatre

Duffy Theatre

         
START WRITING HERE: On Thursday the 9th of February Duffy Came to Pt England School they teach us how to read and succeed what I also learn is read is important to Duffy and me.

My favourite part was when Ruby felt Happy that her Dad took her to School but also  she reads a book . when Ruby grew up she was had baby she read a book to her baby Ruby favourite book was  Alice Wonderland .

I was learning about that  Duffy and I love to read and the Duffy Theatre 

-an Words

I learn how to use word endings to create rhyming words I hope you like my Presentation