Unfinished work Term 3

CO-ED school?

CO-ED school?

Intro- What do you feel about having your children go to a co-ed
school? Having your son/daughter socialise with boys or girls can
affect your daughter/son learning. Have you ever been to a co-ed
school? This essay will be against Co-ed schools.

Topic sentence

When students socialise  with each other it can affect their learning.
Your child gets distracted by boys/girls sometimes they are insecure
of what they look like or what they wear. Girls put on makeup, boys act
cool. They have different attitude.

Paragraph 1-(Different)

Your daughter/son can have different attitude when boys or girls are
around. For example when girls are with their friends they act normal
until boys come along & they change their attitude. This may happen
during school or after school but it will affect their learning. 

Paragraph 2-(Bullying)

Co-ed schools have problems especially when it comes to bullying.
Boys bully girls because they want to, but the girls have different
perspective of bullying each other. Girls bully girls because they get
bullied by the boys they acted to impress the boys. 

Paragraph 3-(The effects on their Learning)

Student who are your children get awful grades that’s because they
get distracted & one way they get distracted by boys/girls. Explame-
Boys get distracted by how a girl looks. They are so focused on trying
to impress her that he losing focused on his learning.

Conclusion 

In conclusion Co-ed school should be separate you don’t want to
affect your child's education do you? Your child's education depends
on it.

Fragile web of life

Task  description:

This term we are learning about science & in science we are learning about food chain & Fragile of life. The fragile web of life is all about  animals&how they couldn't live without bees because they would die us human needs bees to help the planets & we need the planets to survive.

Ecstatic About Essays

Information Reports

WALT: Follow the structure of an information report.

Today I have been learning about Information reports. Information reports remains us to use CDC. Classification, Description & Conclusion.

DRAMA!?!

Poison Drama!!

Chapter 1

Why are you being so dramatic it’s just a little thing “said Kelly”. It might be to you but it was my secret you didn’t need to tell everyone “ said  Bella”. I can’t believe you did that! We’re no longer Best friends. bye. Don’t ever talk to me!! “ Bella snobed away. That was the last conversion Bella & Kelly had. Days went by then weeks then months until they met again. Hey Bella haven’t talked to you in awhile “said kelly”. I know but I still hold a grudge “Bella Said ”. Hey Bella want go get ice cream “Hope said”. Oh I see you find a new friend “Kelly said quietly. Oh yea Hope meet kelly, Kelly meet hope. Nice to meet you kelly”hope giggles”. Same to you hope“Kelly clenches her knuckles”. Well anyways we got to go “Bella pulling hope”.

Little secret?

Chapter 2

Kelly was planning an evil trap to break up Hope and Bella.Kelly bought a disguise to spy on bella. Sneaking & Swooping around watching their every move hoping to find a way to break them apart. Then out of nowhere she heard bella whispering her secret to hope.Hope I need to tell you something” bella says anxiously”. What’s on your mind “Hope says”. I have been hiding a secret & I need to tell you. What is it you trust me “hope said”. I………

TO BE CONTINUED

My Haiku

Today We have been learning about Haiku. Haiku is a japans poetry. In the first  line we had to do a 5 syllable words in the second line we had to do a 7 syllables then in the last line we had to do another 5 syllable words. We had to read a Haiku before doing our own. At first I didn't really know how to do a Haiku but now I am used to it. Have you ever done a Haiku Poetry?. 

Good piece of writing

WALT: Identify what makes a good piece of writing .

This is what Room 4 think make a good piece of writing. I hope you enjoy my post.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY MUM

Today my magnificent Mother turns 47. I just want to take this time to thank god for an amazing mum.
Throughout my life with my mother it has been wonderful. I know sometimes our relationship has been
like a roller coaster but that’s what makes life well life. Even though I don’t get much time with her I
know we have something special. Being her daughter has been the best thing in my life. Life is so easy
when I have her in my life. I just want to say Happy Birthday Mum we love you so much.

God sent you to me for a reason as a special gift from above. We share a amazing bond like no
other. I am so lucky to be your daughter. Your love is all I need in my  life. My mother is a mother
from heaven. She feeds me, she looks after me, she loves me, she cares for me. Without her in
my life everything would be so difficult to bear. I just can't live without an amazing hard working
mother like her.

Ideas

WALT: Expolore our Identities As authors.

To We have discussed thee different things that help us to write. Check out my ideas Below.

WALT: define what makes an active learner

Today we have been learning about what makes a good learner. We started by debating if behaviour is the same with learning. Then I had to create a poster on Word Art. So far I have so many ideas to make a good learner. This lab bottle represents school. School is where we become good learners. School provides use activity to become good learner like the Summer Learning journey or like sports. What do you think a good learner is?. 

Different Audiences

What will be your products or video that will caught peoples eyes to buy it. The information that makes it so important. Who will be your audience?.

THE DARK SIDE OF THE INTERNET!

THE DARK SIDE OF THE INTERNET!

Most people in this world seem like the internet is a safe place well their wrong. You never know what is waiting for you. Leaping in the shadows. The rumours, The blackmailing. What you see is what you seem. Life on the internet will seem like darkness awakening. Calling for help well no one will hear you. Nowhere to escape. Begging for mercy well that won’t help. What you say is what is expected.  So watch what you say you never know if someone watching from the other side of the Internet.

Online?

Reading what’s online. Well there just getting started. The comments get worries and worries. You feel the wind crawling down your neck. Your heart beating as fast as you could ever imagine. Feeling the darkness upon you. Leaping from side to side. Will you ever get out of it?. Trapped in a dark space of lies NOWHERE TO GO NOWHERE TO BE SEEN. Hoping to see the light again. What you read is what you believe.

HOW WILL YOU GET OUT?

Justifying an argument

Justifying an argument

WALT: justify our ideas using conjunctions

Author A:

I strongly believe that students need school uniforms. Students need school uniforms because they
show people what school they go to. All of the students look tidy because they are in the same school
and it’s like free advertising because when people see the uniform they think of the school. So yeah,
school uniforms are good.

Author B:

I firmly believe that school uniforms should be banned. School uniforms are costly and they put a lot
of pressure on the student’s caregivers. Children need new school uniforms every time they grow
and change schools. With some items of clothing costing a hundred dollars or more, the cost involved
in buying a new school uniform is huge! It is particularly difficult for families with two or more
students, as it is hard enough to feed a large family let alone buy an expensive school uniform every
year for each child. School uniforms should be banned for the benefit of parents everywhere!

Which argument do you think is stronger? Author B: because this has given us more information.

What vocabulary do the authors use that you would like to steal? Pressure , involve , difficult , and
enough.

What did you like about the paragraphs?I loved that they used lots of information about why we
don’t did uniform and why we need uniform

What do you think the authors could improve on?They could put pictures up next to the writing
.I think that Author A could improve their writing and use more information.

Highlight the signposts (topic sentences) the authors use in purple.

I strongly believe that students need school uniforms. Students need school uniforms because they
show people what school they go to.

Highlight the conjunctions or connecting words (for, because, and, but, as…) that the authors use
in blue.

THANK YOU

I would like to thank the teacher that came to camp and help.I would also like to thank the parent that came to camp as well.Please leave a comment

Year 6 Camp

Recount Writing
Year 6 Camp

On Tuesday 21st November we had an excited day .We were going to Camp Bentzon for year 6 camp. We all had to wake up at 6:30 so we could make it to school because we have to leave a 7:00 on the bus.So after I woke up I said my Goodbye to my Family as I left home .I had To get to school as soon as possible so I told my dad if he could take me and he said yes I really wanted to go to camp  because all my friends were going plus it was going to be so fun.I got to school and I made it on time I .The bus was there near the school entrance and I had to go to the breeze so a rushed to the breeze where everyone was. I had no hat so I told Mr J if I could  use a hat he gave me an FBI hat.I went back to the breeze after I got my hat we had a meeting with Mr Burt. After everything was finished we hopped on the bus and hurry to the fair.It took 20 Minutes to get there .

As we were waiting we were sing song and playing games.After 20 Minutes we Got there and we had to get off the fair because we had to get all the bags off.It took 10 Minutes to take all the bags off after that we had a Hike it was very very hard to go up the hill and down the hill but the hardest part was going up the hill because it was very very high but I use the trees to go up.After a while we had a rest because we got to the rock mountain the rock mountain is where you have to put on rock on the other rocks.when we were finished we had to get back to camp and we  had to down now.

On the next day we had to do our activities my first  activities  for my group was Burma trail.Burma Trail is when you are blindfolded and you have to find climb up but  you have to climb up with the rope you also have to find your way back to the finished line it was so hard for me because I hit my head on a trees that was so funny but it hunted at the same time .

As time passed by it was the next day It was time for the next activities our next activities  was sailing.Sailing was so fun but I almost fell off the boat that I was on it was scary because there was stingrays around us I didn’t want to fell off my boat because there were  stingrays every me but I had a lot of fun with my Teacher Mr Goodwin he help me when I was going to fell .

First of all I would want to Thank the Teacher for coming and helping and Looking after us I would also like to Thank  the cooker for cooking the best food for us .Thank my parents for paying my camp feast and my friend was looking out for me and caring to .

The best Thing I loved about camp was The camp concert Katz won which was my team and we had a lot of fun making the dance routine.That was the best time of camp it was fun and amazing I loved camp.

String Instruments

Today I have been learning all about String Instruments like Guitar Violin and Double Bass .The Guitar Violin and Double Bass are amazing and great to play and learn from it If you play the Guitar Violin and Double Bass then you are amazing and never give up on the playing the Guitar Violin and Double Bass.

Musical Madness Making pan pipes

                                                       Musical Madness Making pan pipes

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• On Wednesday, 25 October one of PT England’s class which was room 8 literacy made pan pipes.I had to pick a partner and I picked Leilani and Nahea it was amazing and fun at the same time that we making pan pipes.After we all picked a partner we had to wait for along time on the floor because our teacher Miss parrant had to get the things that we needed to make our pan pipes.As a class we all sat on the mat and watched a movie from one of our other teachers Miss Buchanan .After watching the movie me and my class had to set at a table and waited until our teacher Miss parrant handed out of some cardboard and eight straws .After we had each have eight straws and a cardboard we had to line them the straws with the cardboard.As we were wait for a couple of minutes our next instructions was to cut the straws from the corner to corner .Each straws had to look the same but it didn’t have to look the same as the other ones  it just had to be cut .After cutting the straws we had to put the straw on the cardboard and it took for ages for me to put the straws on the cardboard because it was bendy.After we had made our pan pipes we had to test it out with our partner it was cool but it could have  sound better because it sounded  like a pan pipes but different .After we had tested it we all sat on the mat and waited until Miss parrant told us if we should have done better and I should have done better it was just that I couldn’t hold the cardboard I enjoyed  everything about making pan pipes it was amazing and fun to play with .Testing the pan pipes was so cool I could hear amazing things but I wish it could sound better than before.Miss parrant is great at making pan pipes that why she is a teacher I have learned a lot from pan pipes like what things you need how to make it and so much more I wish I can go back into to time and make another one again because it was so fun.

Musical Madness

Immersion Assembly

Musical Madness  

 
Today on monday the 16th of october we came back from school to learn about our topics Musical Madness.When I got to school we had to line up in our class lines .Were learning about Musical .All of our teacher had to make a movie to tell people what we were learning about.As you know people love music .Music is a great thing to learning about so that is what we are learning about. It is so amazing what we can learn from music.Term 1 was learning about music and how music makes you feel and something makes you cry music you're feeling great and something affect your feeling. Team 2 was learning about making songs with different instruments like drums piano and the guitar and others instruments Team 3 was telling stories with song and also sing in class but with music   Team 4 was learning about songs and music and also sing in the car when they come to school and last but not least Team 5 watching movies like the lion king the lion king is he best movie for little kids. Team 5 was also learning about how music in movie can affect your feeling.Our topic is about music .As you know team 4 had to make a movie and there movie was about them sing in the car well they were coming to school and also screaming with excitement .When they saw Mr J they stopped Singh and  Mr J started sing and was making loud noise  with his music.So that is team 4 topics about .Senec this term topic is Musical Madness I want to learn things about music and instruments and so much more. I also want to learn to play the drums piano and the guitar there is so much more to explore with instruments and music .I love this term theme because I love music and instruments. Music and instruments are amazing .You can do whatever you want to do with instruments like play with the instruments or learn how to play instruments that you have very every had played before.Music is the best thing because something when you are sad you can just listen to songs and it will make you happy .Music is one of a kind it is also written from the best singer from around the world.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY

Today on Monday 25 of September it is Our Teacher birthday Mr Goodwin .Happy birthday Mr Goodwin I hope you have a great day today and you well go home feeling happy inside.