I am a Year 8 learner in Room 5 at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. My teacher is Mrs Ilaoa.
Tuesday, 28 March 2017
UNWANTED VISITORS
This is all about UNWANTED VISITORS so please leave a comment
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Miss parrant,
reading,
room 8,
Tehillah 2017,
UNWANTED VISITORS,
year 6
Monday, 27 March 2017
water Worries
This is all about water Worries so please leave a comment
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2017,
Nada,
room 8,
WATER WORRIES,
year 6
Friday, 24 March 2017
NATIVE TREES
This is all about NATIVE TREES so if you want to learn morn about Tree then here is a presentation
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2017,
Miss parrant,
NATIVE TREES,
room 8,
Tehillah,
writing,
year 6
Wednesday, 22 March 2017
WATER WORRIES
This is all about WATER WORRIES So please leave a comment
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Mrs Parrant,
room 8,
team 1,
Tehillah,
WATER WORRIES,
week 6,
year 6
Why trees are important
Why trees are important
Persuasive Writing
Persuasive Writing
Introduction - Hook the reader
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We are learning about Why should we plant trees ` Because if there is No food we can just go to the trees and Grab a appel of a tree that why we should plant trees
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Paragraph one - Losing our trees
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If you we are losing our tree then that mean that the Environment is dieing
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Paragraph two - Why trees are important for the environment
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Why are Trees so important? Trees are vital. As the biggest plants on the planet, they give us oxygen, store carbon, stabilise the soil and give life to the world's wildlife. They also provide us with the materials for tools and shelter.
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Paragraph Three
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With persuasive writing you need to include information that supports the other side even if you don’t agree with it. Here you will need to include some facts that support the chopping down and destruction of trees. Write these facts however you will be able to support your side by explaining how this show trees are important
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Paragraph Four
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If we do not Look after our tree and our Environment the Environment might die and they might be no more trees and no Environment
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Paragraph Five
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You should plant tree because some tree are dieing and it also give as food like apple’s and it also give as oxygen and shade .
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Conclusion
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We are learning about why we should plant tree we should plant trees because it will give us oxygen and shade but most over it is Important to our environment .
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Tuesday, 21 March 2017
Monday, 20 March 2017
Wetland Forest
Today we have being learning about Wetland Forest so please leave a comment .
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2017,
Mrs Parrant,
reading,
Tehillah,
Wetland Forest
Plastic Fantastic
Today we have being learning about Plastic Fantastic so please leave a comment .
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2017,
Mrs Parrant,
Plastic Fantastic,
reading,
room 8,
Tehillah
Tuesday, 14 March 2017
Letter to Mr McKenzie
Letter to Mr McKenzie
Prompts:
This term, we have been learning about…
I am writing to you…
Plan for your writing here:
When : On March the 14th
What : We need to ban plastic bags
Why : Plastic bags are killing bird and Tortoise And animals
Who :Room 8 and the teacher
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Mr McKenzie
Plastic Bag Road
Auckland
New Zealand
YOUR FIRST NAME : Loia
Pt England School
Auckland
New Zealand
TODAY’S DATE !4 March
Dear Mr McKenzie,
Dear Mr McKenzie, we need to ban plastic bags because it is Killing Turtles bird and also animal .Did you know when the bird go and find food they actually bring back plastic instead of fish
Kind regards,
YOUR NAME Tehillah
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Letter to Mr McKenzie,
Mrs Parrant,
room 8,
team 1,
week 3,
year 6
WHO AM I
Who am I?
On Tuesday 21th of February at Pt England School in room 8 had a challenges of Who Am I It was so funny and amazing at the same time I would like to Thank miss for letting us do who am I
Introduction: Hook the reader, What is your recount about Use the 5 W’s
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When: It was on Tuesday 21th of February.
Where: At Pt England School in room 8 .
What: We had to put a Sticker that a a name on it then our Partner headed to describe what we who were .
Who: The people that were there were Mrs Parrant and the Classroom .
Why: We did it because we want it to write about it .
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Body 1: This body of text will be focusing on the instructions you were given by your teacher. What were you thinking and how were you feeling when the teacher was explaining what the challenge was?
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Today mrs Parrant was talk about Who am I when she was talking about it I feel so happy I want to play it Straight away .I was Ariel she is a Mermaid and a queen the challenge was fun ands funny some of the boy Sticker were girl and some of the Sticker were boy .
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Body 2: This section will be based on the what you were thinking and feeling when you were asking the questions of who you were OR when you were being asked questions (Whichever one came FIRST for YOU)
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When they were talk about my Characters I know straight away that it was Ariel
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Body 3: This section will be based on the what you were thinking and feeling when you were asking the questions of who you were OR when you were being asked questions(Whichever one came SECOND for YOU)
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When they were Describing it ever more I thought it was Another character .
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Conclusion This section will be based on what you learned from your experience. What would you do differently if you did it again?
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I wouldn't say random things take out loud.
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On Tuesday 21th of February at Pt England School in room 8 had a challenges of Who Am I It was so funny and amazing at the same time I would like to Thank miss for letting us do who am I
CAMP
Introduction
Hook the reader in, and let them know what you're writing is going to be about.
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We are writing about Camp .
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Paragraph 1
What is camp. When, Where, Why. All the information. What activities did you do?
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Camp start on 8th of March it was also School and we did Camp because we just want to do one .
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Paragraph 2
Highlights. What were your favourite parts, and why?
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My favourite part was the Concert night because we had lots of laugh and funny time .
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Paragraph 3
Thank you’s. Who made this happen for you? I.e. Family, School, Teacher, and Leaders etc
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I will to Thank my family teacher my team Mrs Vaafusuaga for the sport gear and most of all I will like to Thank Mr Burt
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Conclusion
What did you learn about yourself on camp, why would you recommend that every student does this in future.
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That you can be yourself and can have some funny
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On the 8th of march we had a camp at our School it was a lot of funny sleeping in tents eating breakfast every morning and having a dinner every night my Favorites part of camp was the Concert night because we had lots of laugh and funny time I will to Thank my family teacher my team Mrs Vaafusuaga for the sport gear and most of all I will like to Thank Mr Burt for creating Camp for the year 5 and 6 I have learned at camp that you can be yourself and have a lot of funny.
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Mrs Parrant,
room 8,
team 1,
week 4,
writing,
Year ⅚ Camp,
year 6
Monday, 13 March 2017
BUTTERFLIES
This is all about Butterflies .
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2017,
BUTTERFLIES,
Mr Goodwin,
team 1,
week 3,
year 6
Tuesday, 7 March 2017
Monday, 6 March 2017
NATIVE TREES
To I did a post about palm trees and coconut trees because they are special to our planet so please leave a comment .
Thursday, 2 March 2017
Wetland Forest
Today we have beaning learning about wetland forest there is a lot of interesting thing in this presentation so please leave a comment Thank you
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