Information Reports

WALT: Follow the structure of an information report.

Today I have been learning about Information reports. Information reports remains us to use CDC. Classification, Description & Conclusion.

Writing an effective Opening

DRAMA!?!

Poison Drama!!

Chapter 1

Why are you being so dramatic it’s just a little thing “said Kelly”. It might be to you but it was my secret you didn’t need to tell everyone “ said  Bella”. I can’t believe you did that! We’re no longer Best friends. bye. Don’t ever talk to me!! “ Bella snobed away. That was the last conversion Bella & Kelly had. Days went by then weeks then months until they met again. Hey Bella haven’t talked to you in awhile “said kelly”. I know but I still hold a grudge “Bella Said ”. Hey Bella want go get ice cream “Hope said”. Oh I see you find a new friend “Kelly said quietly. Oh yea Hope meet kelly, Kelly meet hope. Nice to meet you kelly”hope giggles”. Same to you hope“Kelly clenches her knuckles”. Well anyways we got to go “Bella pulling hope”.

Little secret?

Chapter 2

Kelly was planning an evil trap to break up Hope and Bella.Kelly bought a disguise to spy on bella. Sneaking & Swooping around watching their every move hoping to find a way to break them apart. Then out of nowhere she heard bella whispering her secret to hope.Hope I need to tell you something” bella says anxiously”. What’s on your mind “Hope says”. I have been hiding a secret & I need to tell you. What is it you trust me “hope said”. I………

TO BE CONTINUED

Current Events

My Current event

Show don't tell

What I have learnt today is showing gives more information it also can give you a picture in your head. Sometimes telling can take a long time because some readers give to much information & that will bore the readers.

Author's Choices

Current Events

My current for today is about ANZAC day. Lest we forget what they did for us. 

We all shall not forget. It is so hard & sad to hear the men & boys passed away in war.

He should not use ANZAC day as a day off but a day to remember those who we have lost.

Silence

WALT: follow the structure of a narrative

Silence

City by city life have been taken. No one to be found but bloodless bodies. Smiley blindness flying creatures looking for their next victim. You make a sound you die!!. Not many people survived but One family & there dog. They drove out of town but little did they know those Creatures were right behind them. They stop at some point & looking in the distance they saw it, a DEAD BODy. those creature found their victim. Looking closely &  peking out the window those vicious animals attack the window they all screamed with fear as dog the barked. Calming down the dog didn’t stop barking. They had no choice but to let it out of the car. Barking it head off the vicious animals feeds on it’s flesh piece by piece. WHat will they do to escape this nonsense. Driving off they hear on the radio saying “hello if you can me there is a safe place up here in rosey wheel if anyone is there we have a safe place for you”. They all look at each other thinking should we go or not. They had no other choice they had to go there it was the only option. Running over dead bodies & feeling  noxious. ALmost there just a few more miles and we will be safe at last said mum nervously. A few moments passed by & they were finally there. Opening the door as quiet as they. Then all of a sudden mum made a sound quickly they ran to the door and screaming out they said “oPEn THE DOOR PLEASE Open the door!!. Those creatures were right behind them. THey were everywhere. The door finally opened & what they saw was frightened.TO BE COUNTICE