Introduction
Hook the reader in, and let them know what you're writing is going to be about.
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We are writing about Camp .
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Paragraph 1
What is camp. When, Where, Why. All the information. What activities did you do?
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Camp start on 8th of March it was also School and we did Camp because we just want to do one .
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Paragraph 2
Highlights. What were your favourite parts, and why?
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My favourite part was the Concert night because we had lots of laugh and funny time .
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Paragraph 3
Thank you’s. Who made this happen for you? I.e. Family, School, Teacher, and Leaders etc
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I will to Thank my family teacher my team Mrs Vaafusuaga for the sport gear and most of all I will like to Thank Mr Burt
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Conclusion
What did you learn about yourself on camp, why would you recommend that every student does this in future.
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That you can be yourself and can have some funny
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On the 8th of march we had a camp at our School it was a lot of funny sleeping in tents eating breakfast every morning and having a dinner every night my Favorites part of camp was the Concert night because we had lots of laugh and funny time I will to Thank my family teacher my team Mrs Vaafusuaga for the sport gear and most of all I will like to Thank Mr Burt for creating Camp for the year 5 and 6 I have learned at camp that you can be yourself and have a lot of funny.
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