What is school for?
School is a place where many kids come to get an education. There are many schools in
New Zealand. In New Zealand kids from ages 5 to 18 can attend school. Kids from 5 to 10
or 9 are in primary school, Kids between 11 to 13 are in intermediate & kids from ages 14
to 18 are in College. Here in New Zealand there are many schools for kids to apply for or
attend.
New Zealand. In New Zealand kids from ages 5 to 18 can attend school. Kids from 5 to 10
or 9 are in primary school, Kids between 11 to 13 are in intermediate & kids from ages 14
to 18 are in College. Here in New Zealand there are many schools for kids to apply for or
attend.
Body Paragraph 1- What we learn.
In New Zealand there are many subjects that kids can pick to learn about. There is English,
history, mathematics, physical education, science & sports all of these subjects can help
children for the future. Subjects like get us into good colleges, scholarships & many more.
Each & one of these subjects can help you to get a good job for the future.
history, mathematics, physical education, science & sports all of these subjects can help
children for the future. Subjects like get us into good colleges, scholarships & many more.
Each & one of these subjects can help you to get a good job for the future.
Body paragraph 2- Tech
What is Tech? Well if you didn't know what tech is it is a place where kids learn about
technology, cooking, woodwork & music. Tech stands for technology meaning we use
different tools to help us create different things. Technology is what we use to create
amazing things. Tech is only on tuesdays & Thursdays. When it comes to Tuesdays or
Thursdays kids walk down to Tamaki college to learn.
technology, cooking, woodwork & music. Tech stands for technology meaning we use
different tools to help us create different things. Technology is what we use to create
amazing things. Tech is only on tuesdays & Thursdays. When it comes to Tuesdays or
Thursdays kids walk down to Tamaki college to learn.
Body Paragraph 3 -Soft Skills
Soft skills means having your own personal attributes. You can learn how to become a
leader, you can learn how to make friends,you can learn how to be kind & you can learn
how to respect people. In other words it can mean the PT England way. Soft Skills can
mean anything, by anything I mean a skill that you are able to do it can be leadership,being
a good friend, being respectful or a kind person. What soft skills do you value?
leader, you can learn how to make friends,you can learn how to be kind & you can learn
how to respect people. In other words it can mean the PT England way. Soft Skills can
mean anything, by anything I mean a skill that you are able to do it can be leadership,being
a good friend, being respectful or a kind person. What soft skills do you value?
In conclusion school is a great place for kids to get a good Education, to learn how to be
a leader, to get scholarships & many more. School can teach a lot of kids from year 1s to
13. School is more than you expected there is more to it then learning.
a leader, to get scholarships & many more. School can teach a lot of kids from year 1s to
13. School is more than you expected there is more to it then learning.
Hi Tehillah,
ReplyDeleteI can clearly see that you had one point per paragraph and that you have used topic sentences. Next time remember you can put your headings in bold and you don't need to write that they are body paragraphs when you publish your work. You are getting way better at using full sentences and the correct tense!