What makes a good piece of writing

WALT: explore our identity as authors

Today we had to put our minds to the test. We had to come up with many ideas about what makes a good piece of writing. I had so many ideas. What do you think makes a good piece of writing?.

Happy New Year!

                        

The story That I have read is about a family that is going overseas to Great Barriers. Have you ever heard of Great Barriers. Well Great Barriers was bursting through flames because of a bonfire. A story called Happy New Year! is like how the bonfire started.

Something Alive

                      

Task description:

Today I have read s story about a girl name Jem that has something special growing inside of her. The main point in the story is it doesn't matter where you were born it matters if your proud of where you come from. To all the people in the world should be proud of where they came from.

Good piece of writing

WALT: Identify what makes a good piece of writing .

This is what Room 4 think make a good piece of writing. I hope you enjoy my post.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY MUM

Today my magnificent Mother turns 47. I just want to take this time to thank god for an amazing mum.
Throughout my life with my mother it has been wonderful. I know sometimes our relationship has been
like a roller coaster but that’s what makes life well life. Even though I don’t get much time with her I
know we have something special. Being her daughter has been the best thing in my life. Life is so easy
when I have her in my life. I just want to say Happy Birthday Mum we love you so much.

God sent you to me for a reason as a special gift from above. We share a amazing bond like no
other. I am so lucky to be your daughter. Your love is all I need in my  life. My mother is a mother
from heaven. She feeds me, she looks after me, she loves me, she cares for me. Without her in
my life everything would be so difficult to bear. I just can't live without an amazing hard working
mother like her.

Ideas

WALT: Expolore our Identities As authors.

To We have discussed thee different things that help us to write. Check out my ideas Below.

WALT: define what makes an active learner

Today we have been learning about what makes a good learner. We started by debating if behaviour is the same with learning. Then I had to create a poster on Word Art. So far I have so many ideas to make a good learner. This lab bottle represents school. School is where we become good learners. School provides use activity to become good learner like the Summer Learning journey or like sports. What do you think a good learner is?.