Tehillah @ Pt England School: Good piece of writing

Wednesday, 20 February 2019

Good piece of writing

WALT: Identify what makes a good piece of writing .

This is what Room 4 think make a good piece of writing. I hope you enjoy my post.

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Danni Stone23 February 2019 at 13:37
Hi Tehillah,

You had lots of ideas about what makes a good piece of writing. What would you like to work on in your own writing this year?
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Kia Orana, Bonjour, Hola, Hallo, Calo, Hola, Namaste and Greetings to you all my name is Tehillah and I am 11 years of age. I go to this wonderful school of PES ( Pt England School) and I am a year 8 this year. My Teachers for this year are Mrs Moala, Mrs Stone, Miss Tukpue, Mrs Ilaoa and Mrs Tele’a. My goal for this year is to make the most of my year since it will be the last year I will be attend at Pt England. It is also a goal for me this year to learn and experience things and hopefully use these skills throughout my on coming year of college next year! This year we have welcomed the new year 7s and we are very happy for them to join our whanau of the role models of this school. During the holiday most students have attended the SLJ (Summer Learning Journey) including me. Our theme for this year is Kia Pai Te Kotahi which means It’s better together. I come from a beautiful country which is Samoa. I am part Tongan, German, Fijian, Welsh, Scottish and full Samoan. I have two amazing parents and 7 creative sibling including me.

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Wednesday, 20 February 2019

Good piece of writing

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