Wednesday 25 September 2019

CO-ED school?

CO-ED school?
Intro- What do you feel about having your children go to a co-ed
school? Having your son/daughter socialise with boys or girls can
affect your daughter/son learning. Have you ever been to a co-ed
school? This essay will be against Co-ed schools.


Topic sentence
When students socialise  with each other it can affect their learning.
Your child gets distracted by boys/girls sometimes they are insecure
of what they look like or what they wear. Girls put on makeup, boys act
cool. They have different attitude.


Paragraph 1-(Different)
Your daughter/son can have different attitude when boys or girls are
around. For example when girls are with their friends they act normal
until boys come along & they change their attitude. This may happen
during school or after school but it will affect their learning. 


Paragraph 2-(Bullying)
Co-ed schools have problems especially when it comes to bullying.
Boys bully girls because they want to, but the girls have different
perspective of bullying each other. Girls bully girls because they get
bullied by the boys they acted to impress the boys. 


Paragraph 3-(The effects on their Learning)
Student who are your children get awful grades that’s because they
get distracted & one way they get distracted by boys/girls. Explame-
Boys get distracted by how a girl looks. They are so focused on trying
to impress her that he losing focused on his learning.


Conclusion 
In conclusion Co-ed school should be separate you don’t want to
affect your child's education do you? Your child's education depends
on it.

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