Monday 24 December 2018

SLJ

Over the years, scientists have made some surprising discoveries. One of
these discoveries is that we have entire cities (e.g. Jakarta, Indonesia and Venice, Italy) that are slowly sinking into the ocean. Scientists believe that, one day, the cities will disappear completely under the water. Yikes!
Some of the residents (people living in the cities) have taken pictures of their neighbourhoods and written stories about their lives in order to make a record of what ‘life was like’ in their city before it disappeared.
Let’s imagine that New Zealand was going to sink to the bottom of the ocean next week (Eek!). Before it sinks you are asked to write a blog post telling people what life was like in New Zealand in 2018.
On your blog, post a description of life in New Zealand in 2018. Please remember that the people who read your post will have never been to New Zealand or even seen a picture so it is your job to ‘paint a picture’ of New Zealand using your words. You can also post pictures, if you wish. Be sure to fully attribute the pictures.


Over the past few years life in New Zealand has changed. Scientists from around Aotearoa have discoveries different kinds of  species.

Christmas-Soon it will be Christmas,our traditions is having a Christmas in the park many people come to have fun playing games and eating different foods.

Sky tower-Have you ever been in the sky tower. The sky tower is in the city is it a tall building. It is 328 meatres (1,076 ft) tall. The sky tower is the longest and tallest tower in New Zealand. 

Aotearoa-There is many places in Aotearoa like,Oakley creek waterfalls ,Mission bay beach,Museum of New Zealand Te Papa Tongare wa,Queenstown,Christchurch, Rotorua and many more. New Zealand is a place filled with love and care.

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora & Namaste Tehillah,
    Thanks for completing another activity! I really liked your final sentence here "New Zealand is a place filled with love and care", as this is such a nice way to finish a piece of writing. Also, I appreciated that you took your time to make a drawing of the Sky Tower and used pictures to make your post very eye-catching. Nice job!
    Feeding forward, in your first sentence you wrote about how scientist have discovered news species, which species? Make sure to always back up your statements with an example. Also, you wrote about our Christmas tradition to go to the park, it would be nice if you have explained that because is summer here we celebrate Christmas more in the outdoors such as parks and beaches. Last but no least, you have added some important information about how high the Sky Tower is but I can see that you did copy and paste, which is absolutely fine, however, next time makes sure to adjust the font so it all look the same.
    Keep up with your good work!
    Kia kaha,
    Patricia

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